Classmate Feedback

Adila Ablat

https://www.adilaablat.com/blog

I really enjoy the simplicity of your website. The minimal backgrounds and color palette feel very airy and refreshing. I like the addition of a blog page, I would date code each blog post so it is easier to follow. Your packaging page has great pieces, but I feel the other categories are really lacking, maybe just combine them into one page. Also, I think you can work on expanding your projects so they feel more complete and not just single mockups. For example, the Zevia Sparkling Tonic Packaging is just a single mockup, but what if you added logo variations, different drink colors/designs, or advertisement mockups. I feel like treating each of your projects like this would be very helpful for fleshing out your portfolio. Overall, great job!

Cameron Pangilina

https://cameronpangilinan.squarespace.com

I love the vibe of your website overall. It is unique to you, which is incredibly important when standing out in the job market. I also how your three categories are quite unique and make you stand out. One thing I would say is readability of the header is not great, as the colors are so close together. I would increase the contrast there. You can also add headings to each page, so the viewer knows what project relates t what section. I would also work on adding more to your projects, because as of right now, they’re all just mostly single pictures. I would look into adding some mockups, especially of the catalogs and book covers. Also, i would add a contact page in order for clients or employers to more easily contact you. Some things to fix, but great so far!

Gabriela Moreno

https://gabymorenoart.blog

First off, I really like your personal branding. The logo, hero image on the homepage, and the subtitle of your name all are cohesive and feel very personal to you. I also enjoy your three different categories of designs with the descriptions. One thing I would say is to make those descriptions a little smaller and remove some of the negative space around it, so your work can be higher up on the page. I also think you could work on adding more to your projects, like how the Writers Guild project has many mockups and variations that makes it feel complete. The poster projects could be part of a larger series, or you could do variations, like color changes, etc. I also think you should work on your contact page and add an actual button that emails could be sent through. Other than that, really great website!

Jessie Cao

https://jessiekimcao.com/

First off, great job with capturing such simplicity, yet effective design within your website. I love how everything is there and visible, especially on the homepage. The way you are treating your text feels clean and refreshing. Not too much to say critique wise, but i would maybe make all your text clickable in the header, because it gets a little bit confusing with some being able to be clicked while others are not. But other than that, really great overall and your portfolio is quite good. This is what I strive to do is create projects that are good quality and extensive. Great designs and great website!